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[Lovro]

Actually...

I think he is gay, considering he's Rafael's boyfriend. Nothing wrong with it, of course. It'd be nice if people could stop using the word queer, and rating it low because of their own homophobia and insecurity. Anyway, about the drawing itself, the proportions are just beyond perfect. Color would be nice, but otherwise, really solid.

Comic-Ray responds:

Just to mention it, Lovro loves your review. ^^

[Tactical TankMen]

Near perfect!

The face and posture makes for a great sense of urgency, but the whizzing bullets need to stand out a bit more.

Kinsei responds:

yeah I wanted to push out the bullets and damaged wall a little more, but I kind of got lazy :P..... it happens, right?

[Sarah Palin]

Pft.

Judging from your score, it looks like no one read your opinion.

Jibber-Zen responds:

Yeah. I had hoped more people browsing this part of the site would be inclined to vote on the quality of the art and not their opinions of any real individuals depicted in the art.

[Camoflage]

So amazing, I wrote this.Think of it as a tribute.

Story: Jim's squad was sent to investigate some motion picked up by sensors half a klick away from base camp. When they arrived, Jim raised his fist, and his men stopped a few feet behind him. "This is the place.", he whispered. No sooner than he uttered those words, gunfire erupted from their left flank. "Contact!", shouted Jim, as he slid behind a fallen tree. Two men were already down, and the rest were taking fire. After a few moments in cover, the frightened men peeked up. There were no heat signatures, no sound, movement, nothing. Then, from behind, more gunfire took the lives of half the remaining forces. Jim swore, "Shit! Command! Do you copy?" No reply came, save for the static. His men, meanwhile, were frantically shooting everywhere, since they kept taking fire from all directions. A man yelled, "Sir! Can you get on the horn?"
"No! We're being jammed!" In a matter of seconds afterward, all his men were dead. And still not any visual of any opposing force. He drew his pistol and yelled "You fuckers! They're dead! Take me too!" Pain erupted from his leg, and he fell to the ground. A shadow on the ground slowly approached him from his front.
"FuckerS?" The sinister voice put emphasis on the "S".
Jim realized with horror who this was. "Y... You... The-"
"I'm aware of my nickname. The 'Angel of Death'. Although, it isn't as... professional as my colleagues would prefer. You can call me..."
As the invisible man spoke these words, he slowly became visible from thin air.
"You can call me 'Condor'. And to answer the question that I'm sure is on your mind, no, I won't kill you. I think I'll let you die there, on the ground. Bleeding." Jim raised his pistol, aimed right between the man's eyes, and shot. The sharp crack echoed through the dense forest. Jim laughed a bit, before noticing a flat, round piece of metal stuck to the man's helmet. Condor flicked it off, and said "Nice try."
The man turned and prepared to leap away. Jim coughed up blood and bile onto his chest. In a raspy voice, he yelled, "Condor!"
The man turned his torso to face the dying man. With the last of his energy, Jim pressed a button on his helmet, and said with a chuckle, "Say cheese." Condor pumped his legs, and left a small explosion of dust as he leapt a full 40 yards away, and hit the ground running.
A full day passed with no word from squad six. A scouting party was sent to find out their fate. Many rotting corpses were found, along with the Corporal's helmet. It had one reconaissance image stored in it's mainframe. This is that photo.
END OF STORY

I f you don't like the technology/sci-fi style of my story, to F'n bad. It was tailored to my fictional universe.

JoshSummana responds:

hahaha woah!! A tribute :O thanks very much :) lol. Nice story man :)